would YOU rent this?

My house is listed on craigslist now.
http://sfbay.craigslist.org/sfc/apa/1662678716.html

I'm very curious if I have worded this well. Please let me know if you would rent this, or if the description scares you away.

I'm not ready to rent yet. I'm mostly curious to see if I get any responses and maybe renters who are looking for a bit down the road.