Jo Rhett (jorhett) wrote,
Jo Rhett

Yet another round of edits to Children

After working my way through frustration with certain parts of my writing style becoming the obvious focus of reviewers, I spent some time working through their points and the wording of the text with Krys and found some useful changes to make.

The story has grown another 400 words and broken the 10k count now. But I'm feeling stronger than ever about it. I'm sad that I missed the WotF submission slot for the last quarter, but it gives me even more time to finish it up.

Since this deadline is past, back to working on Door and getting it ready for ClarkesWorld.

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