Jo Rhett (jorhett) wrote,
Jo Rhett
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significantly improved Children draft complete

It's oh-god-thirty but I've finished a new draft of Children of Another Star. I combined more scenes. I reduced point of view. And I added a lot more details here and there to help tie the story structure together. It's a lot stronger now.

One more pass on editing for late night gotchas, and I'll punch it out to readers.

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